Monday, April 25, 2011

Introdution of indispensable children

     What do you think about what teens were doing today? I believe that most of them were studying at school. Some of them might stay at home because of sickness. Some of them might drop the school in order to travel with their parents. However, as immigration as the United States, there are many newcomers who come to depend on their children because of language problems. Those children are obliged to support their parents in many ways. Such practices might give those children several negative effects.  

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  2. Chiachi remember the example that profesor kim showed us yesterday about the introduction. it seems to me that yours have that kind of problem too.The firsts sentences, i think, are not related to you thesis satatement althought you tesis is very clear. :)

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